Let's get started with a sample:
Email A:
From: Jason Bourne
To: Martin Smith
I need the test results urgently. Can you please send them right away so we can get on with the next stage of the project?
Email B:
From: Jason Bourne
To: Martin Smith
Hi Martin,
I know you're very busy this week but I was wondering if you could send the test results as soon as possible? We can't start the next stage of the project without them. I'd really appreciate it.
Regards
Jason
- Which email is more polite?
- Is there any situation where email A is appropriate?
How to make request?
1. Saying how you got the contact
-We met last Thursday on your stand at the Munich Trade Fair.
-I am emailing you off your website, which I found through Google.
2. Giving reason for writing
-We are a manufacturer / supplier / provider of ...
-We are interested in ...
-We are a Turkish company exporting to the EU, and we need ...
3. General requests
-We would be grateful for some information about ...
-Please send us information about your product range and prices.
4. Specific requests
-In particular, we would like to know ...
-Please send full details of your prices, discounts, terms of payment and delivery times.
-Could you also say whether there is any minimum order.
5. Close
-An early reply would be greatly appreciated.
-I look forward to an early reply, and am sure that there is a market for your products here in Hungary.
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